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A Narrative of My Desire to Join the World Health Organization

This essay is an author's personal reasons for wanting to be a part of the World Health Organization. It describes characteristics of the organization and characteristics the professional who wants to be part of the organization should have.
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"Your writing is well executed and you have a clear understanding of the essay topic. You have included a lot of detailed information to support your ideas. You have an introduction that lets the reader know what to expect in the rest of the paper but the essay is lacking a conclusion. You do a great job at having natural transitions between sentences but there are occasional awkward transitions between paragraphs. The essay is neatly formatted and easy to read. While you did not specify a specific style format, you do have citations and references. It seems that there are a lot of facts presented in the paper that should be cited but currently are not. There are occasional grammatical errors."

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