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When I was young The suns rays beat down on my heavy down coat but the trouble to take it off couldnt be made Screeching to a jolting stop the submarine yellow school bus opened its doors with a sucking noise similar to a straw Shoving to the front it was difficult not to whip other kids with my fifty-ton backpack I transported around like a pack mule At last I exited the transport and shivered in the cold wind which but a few seconds ago beat me through the thick glass Glancing casually left and right I ran across the small cul-de-sac to my house At the door I had barely raised my hand to the handle when I felt the door swing inwards I involuntarily swayed forward a bit My mom greeted me as she usually did and I gave the hug she had become accustomed to getting and I to giving My aunt had promised to take my sister and I to the candy store that day as she was leaving tomorrow Feigning what I was sure to be an excuse to stay home from the trials of kindergarten my sister had been home sick but I hoped my aunt and I could go to the candy store alone My aunt was sitting in the great room perched on a chair looking at me My mom followed close behind Not really noticing but feeling apprehensive anyway I asked my aunt if we could go to the candy store I got about half way through my sentence when I was cut off by my mom pointing to the stairs I glanced casually at the beige steps My mouth decided to disobey my brain and opened aghast Sitting daintily on the stairs was the sweetest kitten the world will ever see She was the runt of the litter so sitting on the stair her ears didnt quite make it to the line of the
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