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The phone rings and I answer Thank you for calling Radio Shack in Fairlane Meadows how can I help you The voice on the other end asks for Ali Salamey and I reply speaking The voice says she is calling to remind me of my 1045 AM dental appointment that next morning I sigh and tell her I will be there I have never had a fear of the dentists office but this was a follow up to my cleaning I had my first cavity and it needed to be filled I woke up early that morning to run some errands I will never forget that oozy feeling I had standing outside the building Once in the building I immediately smell the mixture of wintergreen-flavored toothpaste and bleach out in the hall even before I got into Dr Guindis office As soon as I open the outer door the blast of cool stale air from the air conditioner hits me in the face making me shiver all over I walk in and signed my name on the sign in sheet The gray-hared woman behind the white-frosted glass slide window sees me and says Doctor Guindi will be with you in just a few minutes I waited and watched the young attractive intern in her white uniform to call out my name I then grab a magazine sitting on the coffee table and while flipping to the first page am suddenly startled only to see pictures of decaying teeth and gums I quickly close the book and shudder at the thought as I roll my tongue over my teeth and thank god they a re all there The nurse calls my name I enter the inner office and sit in the brown leather chair looking at all the shiny stainless steel equipment As I sat down the bright overhead light momentarily blinds me I began thinking to myself Its our nature to
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