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Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you describe that influence This certain individual is very special to me I have looked up to her for as long as I can remember and I dont see that changing anytime soon The individual in my life that has had a significant influence on me is my greatest friend and oldest sister Morgan Morgan is twenty-two years old and has already achieved so much as a result of her passion for life She has gotten where she is today as a direct result of her determination poise and networking Throughout high school she was involved in numerous academic clubs and was still able to stay fully committed to her extracurricular schedules She managed to remain fully engaged in her extracurricular activities and multiple organizations while maintaining her high academic standards During her undergraduate studies she continued to excel both in her commitment to college-level sports and her commitment to community involvement all while maintaining superior academics Responsibility virtue to others and her determination for excellence are all characteristics of her that I hope to incorporate into my overall identity as a woman of societyMorgans commitment to numerous organizations throughout her life has given her lifelong friendships and the ability to network and serve her fellow classmates as well as her community Morgan had to balance many different things in her life A specific example of her flexability was during her first two years of college She was a division-one collegiate cheerleader when she sustained an injury that severed her dream of continuing her athletic path Through this experience and witnessing her spirit and commitment to achieve she focused all her energy into serving on numerous committees which led her into a Presidency role and spokeswoman of a large collegiate organization Through this I have learned that all of
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