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I dont have many vivid memories of my oldest brother Pat when growing up but I do remember the night before he left for college For some reason when my parents told me he was going away for a few months I panicked I didnt want anything to change Pat had always been there and that was the way it was I hardly talked with the guy in the first place or so I believe but I still couldnt manage to hold back the water works when it was my turn to give him a hug goodbye Ive always been an emotional guy so I can understand the crying but it still seems odd to me It was around this point where my parents pitied their eight year-old son enough to push pat to spend some quality time with me before he left the next day So that night we drove to the nearby Super America to pick up some candy Nothing special but it was exciting for my young and sweets-addicted mind nonetheless I hopped into our run-down tan Honda Odyssey and proceeded to stare forward I had never spent a lot of time alone with my oldest brother so I just sat there quietly smirking out of joy and awkwardness We silently drove to the Super America no music no radio but just the sound of the nearby cars swooshing by to accompany us I passed the time by looking out towards the many street lamps guiding our way all the while trying to avoid eye contact We arrived to the store and I hurried out of the van and into the candy isle as fast as possible excited to pick up whatever I saw was the most colorful Even though I was more interested in choosing my own selection I was also enticed in what Pat wanted because I realized at that moment that even though I was sad he was leaving
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