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These two words may seem harmless to the inexperienced but to me they represent pure terror The word mud did not always pierce my heart with fear not until that fateful day three others and I took a walk around my grandmas lake That day The Mud changed the lives of not only myself but also of my mother brother close friend Lets take a walk my mom suggested that fateful morning Yea lets go around the lake Theres some deep mud that goes all the way up to my shins I exclaimed with my friend Patty nodding along vigorously A walk around the lake sounds nice but I am not going in the mud These shoes are brand new replied my mom I wanna go I wanna go my brother Tyler shouted Our walk around the lake started out as a relaxing and fun experience My mom walked up on the sandy beach picking up shells along the way as Tyler Patty and I waded in the lake We had been walking along the still lake for five minutes before we hit the first few traces of mud Slowly our feet began to sink The cool mud filled the spaces in between our toes until it had crept up our feet covering our ankles All right Here it is Isnt the mud deep I squealed in delight Mom come here No way You guys are stupid I am going to laugh when you get stuck in that mud My mom warned us At the time I thought she was just over reacting She is just being my mom I told Patty Dont listen to her she always says things like that I never thought that I would look back on that day wishing I had listened to her Slowly the mud began getting deeper and thicker It crept up our legs like the 1968 Blob It began to encompass us in its wrath of
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