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-Journal- Helens Garden With the advent of the warm season upon me I decided to explore my new surroundings in a new town I had driven past a beautiful garden setting several times downtown and today decided to stop and see this wonderful place When I first drove in and parked I was hit with a profusion of vibrant colors with hues of many shades Upon entering I became bewitched by the multitude of fragrance that abounds Dispersed strategically were several benches donated by families made for the escape into the drawled and drowsed afternoon The sun shone upon one bench with a bright sheen while the others were in shade still As I meander along the paths I am inexplicably drawn toward a beautiful fountain where the soft shimmering afternoon light is reflected off the waters surface The fine cool sheen of the spray played out over the cropped lawns Enjoying this fountain was a mother and her two little girls in vivid pink Easter dress with the mother getting a picture for posterity As I continued on in my journey I wondered of the secrets of the dark green shrubs that abounded the boundaries of the garden Lost in my own thoughts I became aware of being overshadowed suddenly with thick storm clouds As I looked up I was impressed to behold a majestic giant oak tree waving its branches in the wind as if fervently reaching to touch these clouds I realized then that I had little time left to enjoy this wondrous place I hurried on intent upon leaving before the winds brought the rain As I passed a bench I saw a caterpillar I marveled at its beauty It seemed
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