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After The Accident What I said with disbelief Theres no way It cant be I was twenty-three when I lost him My hearts been afflicted with sorrow before but not as much as losing him I still remember that cold January day like it was yesterday A coroner and a policeman came knocking at my door They asked for Mrs Flores Naturally I thought they were looking for my mother-in-law They asked who I was and if I had any relation at all with the Flores family Then they showed me his license to see if I knew him My Jay My God its my Jay The policeman told me what had happened Hes been in an accident maam and I regret to tell you that he didnt make it What I said with disbelief Theres no way It cant be I was in total shock and denial I could not bring myself to the fact that hes gone I did not cry that day I was filled with too much confusion to cry It felt as though an arrow had shot right through my heart I was still in disbelief trying to recall and piece that morning It was 830am when we woke up He was late for work and we were arguing over who was to pick up his son from school in the afternoon Eventually we decided he would since I had a doctors appointment with the OBGYN I kissed him good-bye and I watched him leave in his green Integra Five hours later these people came to tell he is dead I wouldnt accept that I had to see him for myself I could not sleep that night We werent allowed to see his body until the next day I walked into that mortuary with my head up I promised myself not to cry because I was with child But as I entered there the decay stench overcame my confidence
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