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On the day of September 1 2002 my sister Laurie had her big wedding day The day started off at nine o-clock in the morning All of the girls that were in the bridal party came over to my house to get ready As we shoved food down our throats as we did our hair and makeup in a hurry The photographer then decided to arrive twenty minutes early therefore we had to get moving After I rearranged my whole dining room for him we were able to take pictures We took about fifty pictures inside and then we went outside and only took about twenty five Finally the limousine arrived We couldnt leave just yet because we had to wait for the photographer to get out of our house Meanwhile all the girls were being attacked by bees because of the gallons of hairspray that we had in our hair Then the photographer was finished and we all crammed into the limousine We were off to the church and Laurie was as nervous as could be When we got to the church we just stood around and waited for the guests to be seated Then I realized that Laurie was pacing around in a circle and she looked like she was starting to go crazy The priest came over and said a prayer with us and Laurie seemed to calm down again Then the music started playing and Laurie started to get teary-eyed We calmed her down and then got ready to walk down the aisle After the whole bridal party got to the front of the church Laurie and my father started to walk down the aisle My mother and my other sister started bawling their eyes out like a monsoon and I could tell that my father was having a hard time Then my father released Laurie to Chris her fianc and then sat down Laurie and Chris said their vows
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