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Nervousness I sat in the car on my way to the first day of kindergarten My stomach was filled with butterflies and my mind with fears and unexplicable hopes I remember begging my mom to keep me at home I knew nobody in my class All of my friends from my neighborhood were in the other class Oh how I wished that I could be in that class So I looked forward to seeing them after the school day was over This is so because I didnt know that there were any breaks in the progress of the school day As I stared out of the car window towards the schoolyard the second wave of nervousness hit me Once again I begged my mom to go with me And so being the good mother that she is she came The overwhelming smell of asphalt hit me as soon as my size twelve Nikes touched the blacktop My hand tightly gripped my mothers I remember her looking pained tired and sad She had been spending time with my father while he was in the hospital with a blood disease This goes to show that she already had more than enough to deal with We walked hand in hand to the classroom that I had dreaded so much When we entered the classroom the smell of freshly sharpened pencils and new plastics filled my nose All the mothers had come into the classroom with their kids also All were crying mothers included My mom turned to me and informed me that she was leaving I gave my consent then the realization of what I had just done hit me like a ton of bricks All by myself left alone with strangers It was horrible I stood in the same position like a statue In all of my moments of panic I dont think that any have been quite as bad as that was In all of my
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