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As I look upon the annals of my life of 21 years I see many thoughtsvisions and ideas and events of signifigancesome importantsome superfluous and some profoundIt is the latter im concerned withfor it is these events that characterize ones personna leaving a deep scar etched into the soulThe scar that gives me character is the Iron To fully understand its impactone must travel back in time a bitA time before i met the Irona time not all that long agoI was one of themOne of the many you see on a day to day basisA person you couldnt pick out of a crowdYou may know the kindpaper thinclothes hanging offa product of imperfectiona product of mediocritylike everyone else around meNothing is worse than being swallowed by the monster of insignificance I had read about the Greek idealI was fascinated by the concept of a perfect body and a perfect mind meshed into oneharmonious entityAccording to the Greeksone depeneded on the other and in order to functionboth were neededAt this timei was no Davidnor a Herculesbut i knew i could become my own sculptor and create a living masterpieceSomething that which no one can take away from meSomething that i earned As quickly as my revelation of reinvention came abouti decided to put forth my grand plan into action by joining a gymIt was there i was to meet the Iron for the very first timeI slowly and languidly shuffled into the building unsure of what to expectAs I entered my nervousness peaked and thoughts of turning around and going home raced through my mindThe chamber i entered was dark and filled with apparatuses remiscent of medieval torture devicesAnd upon these device were huge menpullingpushing and screamingThis was new to meThis seemed painfuland all my life i did my best to avoid painand now i realized i had to deal with itAlready the Iron was teaching me After a few years i
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