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A Personal Essay About My Plan to Become a Teacher

In this personal essay, the student expresses their desire to become a teacher and discusses educational plans and inspirations.
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Bob's feedback:

"You have the start of a good personal essay here. You have a good idea of the career path you want to pursue, you have a plan outlined, and you've left some options open to explore as you gain experience. The most noticeable problem with this essay is that it is vague. You give some overall impressions about how you feel about teaching, and you mention some great teachers who made your classes enjoyable. While these are great impressions to draw on, they don't make for a particularly insightful essay. What are some specific activities, teaching styles, or lessons you would like to explore with your students? What did your stand-out teachers do to make your classes enjoyable and informative? Brief anecdotes can help bring this essay to life. Specific ideas will make your story more unique to you and give your reader an idea of why you'll make a great teacher.

Make sure to end your essay with a conclusion that sums up your thoughts."

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