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Personal Essay Writing this essay has been imaginably hard for in order to present a glimpse of the real me many aspects of my character must be illustrated If someone were to spend time with me he would discover a charismatic well-rounded young man Many would say that my qualities do not make me the conventional senior in high school My goals have been established and time has come for me to set out for other environments and become self-reliant in a competitive world A career has been premeditated and only I can control my destiny I come from an ethinically diverse family My father is Venezuelan and did not speak English well until he moved to the states at the age of twenty-three My mother is a native Floridian I grew up going to school in an African American neighborhood by choice because my parents wanted me to be exposed to varied cultures There are two passions in this world that I love as much as my family The first is my love of Americas greatest pastime baseball Baseball has established the groundwork that has given me the desire to succeed Baseball has given me the drive to work harder study more and offer all that I can for nothing but respect in return If this is not the definition of a leader one does not come to mind My determination to earn these qualities has taken me twelve years and the hard work has paid off to present the opportunity to attend such a prestigious college like Grinnell Defeat honor respect disappointment and total commitment to a team have been earned because of baseball I have pushed myself to limits that I thought were humanly impossible for the betterment of my teammates I have learned early on to never ever give up no matter how hard circumstances became no matter how tired I was and no matter how
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