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In my life some things have really stunk I felt like a total punk When hope was out of sight I had a brother who stepped in to fight I could be in the dumps really canned he would always lend a helping hand He could be really close or not I could still call him on the spot Not only was he there for the bad days but for the good ones always I cant say weve always been on the same track but my brothers always got my back I could be in any sort of jam some as thick as tar still he would never be that far We used to fight all the time when we were young then well then I pierced my tongue Thats when he went away hes never even come back for like a day Its okay now I dont mind because my brother I can always find I love him more then a lot things and its not only because were siblings Where ever he is I still see his face hes my one and only brother I love you Ace Bibliography Personal Essay My name is Annie Chapman and I am sixteen years old I started my life in 1983 in Los Angeles actually in a suburb called Culver City From the hospital I moved into a house on Lucerne Ave with my father Alan Berftman my mother Mary Lee Chapman and my older brother by four years Ace I spent just short of ten years in that same house While I lived in Culver City I attended a Spanish emersion elementary school called El Rinclon There I learned to speak Spanish as a second language A month before my tenth birthday my parents decided to move to the small town of Little Stone They took ownership of
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