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It happened for as long as I could remember I was ten and my sister was four I am middle- height with light brown hair which goes blond in the summer I have pale skin and when the heat and sunlight touch it my skin develops in to a sea of freckles My sister has brown hair like mine She is shorter than me and she has dark skin We used to live like any other normal family My dad was away on his new job a lot he didnt used to be until some family problems came up and he made his decision not to stay often He comes home every other weekend to see my sister and me My house is fairly big for its age The garden which was facing the road had coarse dry grass which lay like a carpet over the lawn apart from the weeds sprouting along the fence from our neighbours We have a concrete path that leads up to the door which only the postman walks up My parents never socialised with anyone They were alone in their separate little worlds cut out from reality I spend most of my time outside in the garden with my dad My dad works in a coal mine and he looks show it His looks had faded his hair is a mix of grey and black thinning on both sides His hands were calloused and red He means the world to me I do not get to see him as much as I would like but it makes time that I do spend with him special magical and unforgettable He makes me laugh he takes me away from the sad place that is known as home Even if it is for a few hours I am thankful However when I do get home I cry my face wet with tears My insides get sore and I know that another painful
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