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Excitement grew as we climb the rugged path A path which most likely a lot of people have walked on But to us it was new Its destination unknown But we couldnt care less We were by ourselves In an island which most people only dream about Free to do what we want when we want And how we want it done We were soaking in the surroundings all around us Simply marvelling at the beauty of nature Admiring the different types of trees and plants That we didnt even know existed We were comparing the differences of all the shapes and sizes Oohhing and aahing at the different textures and colours Slowly our curiosity got to the best of us We no longer knew where we were Plants and trees started to look the same We turned right back to see if the rugged path was still there Hoping and praying that it was just there Waiting to lead us back to the bottom of the mountain But as figured we were lost The mood of excitement disappeared Only long enough to be replaced with fear We quickly walked back to where we though the path was Trying to remember which tree or plant we passed by No words were spoken Just silently thinking amongst us I squinted my eyes trying to see as far as I can But the sun beaming down on my face didnt help With the beads of sweat slowly trickling down my forehead And my dry mouth thirsting for water We still had no idea where we were How we were going to get back and who would find us Then at the last attempt to find our way back We stopped and stood there in the middle of nowhere Then we heard a sound We heard people talking We looked at each other and quickly stared walking towards the voices Then quickly as it disappeared It suddenly appeared
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