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To fall in love is such a wonderful thing and it can only get better as time goes on right Sometimes though certain circumstances come together and love doesnt get better over time In fact it gets worse you begin to feel suffocated by someone and their insecurities start to overwhelm you In the recent past I ended a two year abusive relationship When I started going out with this boy I thought that I was instantly in love Anything he ever thought I might have wanted I got I was in heaven My parents loved him he was friendly knew so many people and he never hit a girl in his life Who new Id be the first When we started to fall in love I wanted to be with him everyday and he wanted to be with me We were never apart and as happy as anyone could be It was like a typical love story But about seven months later the dark clouds began to role in and the rains came At first it was the guilt trips If I wanted to go out with my friends hed make me feel like a horrible person for not wanting to spend that time with him So day by day time went on and outside of work and school I saw nobody but him He consumed all the free time I could possibly have Thats when the loneliness set in I had no one to talk to about things that bothered or upset me Every time I tried to talk about something in my life he would tell me to stop He didnt want to hear anything except for what a great guy he was or how much I loved him None of it was true I cringed every time I had to say it My love slowly molded itself into hell for me Now that I wasnt allowed
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