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While looking back over the years rummaging through pictures and memories people seem to realize how much they have changed I know that who I am now is not who I used to be I am a sixteen year old junior attending Desert High School I am happy with who I am and who I want to be I love sports and I love being around others especially my friends However when I look back to when I was fourteen year old freshman attending Desert High School a mere two years ago I was not happy with my life or where it was going sports seemed to be a job and all I could do was wait for the day to end so I could be by my self back in my room Looking back on then while seeing now I realized that I have evolved into an entirely different person The summer between eighth grade and freshman year brought about a lot of change for me the biggest being my family moving from Fort Irwin to Edwards AFB From the day we got here all I wanted to do was leave and being new here I had no friends I was still unable to let go of my old home My inability to cope with the change of moving combined with the fact that I had no one to talk to caused me to fall into depression This depression caused my self-esteem which was very high while living at Ft Irwin to plummet this in turn causing me to be anti-social The only escape I had from this downward spiraling path was sports and even this was very little help I disliked everyone on my teams they disliked me and the only reason I played was to spite them So one must ask themselves what caused this change What caused the change from the depressed anti-social freshman to the happy fun-loving junior Many things
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