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Secluded Sand It was a warm summer day The beach was terrific Quiet and secluded not a living soul in sight Tommy looked around smiling Exactly what he needed Quiet place to get some rest Most men could only envy the way he influenced women but he thought it was rather boring Really awful to have all these crowds of empty-headed beauties barely dressed mostly hanging around you making it impossible for you to go anywhere alone He wished there were something anything reasonable to talk about with them anything that made any sense but Of course he had also seen some wonderful girls but these were the exceptions from the rule And when he came across somebody he thought acceptable to have a lasting relation with it always turned out they had a boyfriend or a husband Well he had slept with almost all the girls in town but He too wished he could find a woman to live with for a time or even one he could marry - although the idea did not appeal to him that much All he wanted was a girl who understood him He was sick of all these looks which seemed to be saying Whats he like in bed He has slept with all the girls around Why not me And everybody says hes terrific And the nonsensical Well thats what I thought too coupled with an inviting smile He did not fall for women who would offer themselves He would rather win them with some effort He wanted to appeal to them with something different than this Casanova stuff Worst of all he had no way whatsoever to get rid of the girls who hung around him all the time Everywhere A girl once even got into his hotel room to set a surprise for him in sexy underwear Well he could not deny he liked it He knew why they liked him so much His
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