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I hate you and I never want to talk to you again I yelled That was the last sentence I said to my best friend Joey I was taking an exam in Vancouver School Board which is the place I met Joey That was the beginning of our friendship I was nervous to death because I was in a foreign land with strangers speaking a foreign language that I could not understand I peeked around noticed a girl sitting beside me was trembling and sweating She looked like one of my kind she was a Chinese too I was brave enough to start a conversation with her and I realized that she came from Hong Kong Moreover she was born one day later then I am What a coincidence After the exam I thought I would never see her again but maybe we were destined to be friends we were sent to the same elementary school Joey and I were supposed to attend different elementary schools However both schools were full and there wasnt even one space for an extra student My heart raced when I saw Joey I could not believe that she is attending the same elementary school as me Life was amazing and full of unbelievable surprises that can change your life forever We automatically started hanging out together at school and after school We talked on the phone everyday our topics were endless We spoke Cantonese most of the time even in school the teacher was annoyed by us because we were talking in Cantonese and laughing wildly in class disturbing everyone else We only needed each other because we got all the support care attention and courage from each other Our relationship was very steady no one can come between us We had a very special bond I knew I can never find another friendship like that in my entire life I knew I have to treasure our
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