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Danny all I had to do was say his name and peoples faces would light up thats the kind of person my Dad was He was the life of a party I could not have asked for a more loving and caring Father Unfortunately my time with him was cut short when he died when I was only eight years old Looking back on my life the night my Dad got sick the seven months he spent in the hospital and his death have all had a tremendous impact on the way that I live my life I remember the night that started it all like it was yesterday It was a couple of days after my brothers sixth birthday and my whole family was sitting in the living room watching TV As soon as a commercial came on I went into my room to try on new earrings that I had just received Immediately after I get them in my brother comes running into my room telling me that Dad is going to go to the hospital I can remember brushing him off something like this could never happen to me I thought Finally just to be sure I followed him into the living room where my Dad was laying in the sofa with an ice pack on his head and my neighbor was calling 911 I was in disbelief and wanted to do everything that I could do to help so I went and waved down the ambulance That was the last night that I talked to my Dad the last time we would all sit down and watch TV as a family like we had done every night before For the next and last seven months of my Dads life he was laying in a bed lifeless in a comma We would go across the lake to visit him almost every day and I can remember how happy he would get when
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