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Yesterday I was cleaning out my closet when I came across an old cardboard box with the word Treasure written sloppily across it I was about to throw it away when I realized what it was This was my treasure box This was where I kept all of my coolest and most precious items As I took the lid off a folded piece of pink paper caught my eye It was a love note from preschool It didnt have much on it Just three letters and a name etched in red i u Christina Ill never forget her That note meant everything to me She was the happiest kindest and prettiest person I had ever met We used to do everything together play at the park watch Hey Dude go swimming everything Holding the note to my nose I took a sniff It still smelled like strawberries Next was a piece of wood I kept from a hunting trip my dad and I had gone on It was my first hunting trip and we didnt shoot anything but it meant a lot to me I was with my dad my hero trekking over rocks through mud and across hills I did everything with my dad He was my superman I always took him for granted He was always there when I needed someone to wrestle with talk to and cry with He was the best person I knew until last month when he died from cancer I couldnt have had a better friend or father There was also a pink bubblegum cigar from my nieces birthday Sonna was the cutest baby I used to sit and read Little Red Hen and Mother Goose to her for hours Wed play with Duplo Id sing to her then wed both watch Sesame Street Sonna turned eight last month and she doesnt watch Sesame Street any more but she still loves it when I read to her
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