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I HATE VALENTINES DAY Maria walks into her room obviously tired and cranky Can I barrow youre new CD tomorrow night Im sleeping over at Melissas Trixie asks her No Maria replies Why not Its just one night Trixie argued Cause its mine The argument went into the kitchen where their mother was preparing dinner Whats this about She asked Maria wont let me barrow her CD Trixie yelled First of all its borrowed Second Its my CD Marina yelled back What CD is it Teresa- their mother- asked them Its Nelly Trixie said Well Teresa thought Uh Maria share with your sister And Trixie Your sister doesnt have to let you use her stuff Teresa continued to chopping vegetables for their meal as Trixie and Maria walked back into their room Mom said you have to share with me Trixie bragged to Maria But Maria just smiled Mom also said I dont have to let you use my stuff she said cleverly Just then the phone rang MARINA ITS FOR YOU Teresa called out Maria answered the phone Hello she said Hi Guess who the voice said Erm It couldnt be Kat Okay well guess were I am and who Im with I give up Maria said with a very uncaring look on her face Im at the park with Mark He finally asked me to the dance Thats wonderfulMarina said I gotta go See you tonight Yeah Bye Maria hung up the phone Trixie came out of their room You didnt seem too happy for Kat She said Yeah well Maria paused You were listening to that With that Maria chased Trixie back into their room and pined her down on the bed with her hands around her sisters little neck While Maria was attempting to choke her sister her mother walked in to check on them MARIA She yelled LET YOUR SISTER GO NOW With that Maria let go She was
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