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I feel like a new person Just yesterday I was a nobody and not one person would pay any attention to me Now today Im a star I will no longer be looked upon with scorn and dismissed with a shake of the head Now people look at me with admiration and its I doing the dismissing not somebody else Yesterday I lived on the street a cardboard box was my home and a dirty moth eaten piece of rotting cloth was my bed I ate out of garbage bins competing with the rats Holy patchy grey pants that were ten sizes too big and let the wind in no matter what I did kept me a little bit warm A once white now grey singlet top the only thing I can actually say I owned clothed my upper torso and the final item which adorned me was a green jumper with innumerable patches These were my clothes I lived on the street not knowing where tomorrow would led me not knowing if I would eat not knowing if my some miracle I would die Its really not a good life a life a am glad I left My luck changed I am one of the very few people who can say that their life has completely been changed in one day Yes a period of twenty four hours changed my life literally from rags to riches Well in all truth just one intimate blissful moment of pain and then nothing No more dirt I am clean now no more holey oversized items of discarded clothing now I wear designer labels I have a shower or a bath every night sometimes twice a day I now sleep in a large soft comfy king sized bed with all the blankets I could ever want and a blessed pillow Certainly beats a cardboard box I now have a safe and secure four walled
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