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Nobody really understood They didnt understand what they were talking about when they told me my mom was perfect Sure she was beautiful intelligent successful and rich as well But everyone always seems to forget about the past The scars It didnt show on her surface but my mom had at least one hidden scar that she now covered up And because she covered it up nobody knew about it and she became the role model person in my life She had always told me she left him out of love He always told me he had left her out of guilt Being young and naive I didnt understand that I had thought love was when a boy and a girl got married because they liked each other a lot And my mother and father had gotten married once While they were married they had me I dont remember very much from my childhood but I can expect it was fine I always asked to hear the stories because I loved hearing them My aunt Jemma was always so eager to fill my ears with the pleasing tales You were the perfect family she used to say Young and new and happy she would say But it didnt stay like that for long I now realize that it was my fathers actions that caught up with him and my mothers realisations that caught up with her Whether they split out of love or out of guilt I might never know All I know is that I continued living with my mom and I thought nothing could have been better We lived in a clean penthouse apartment that looked out over the rest of the city It was a beautiful house and was much too big for just the both of us We were like the only two fish swimming in the whole ocean- in that place Our modern furniture and expensive appliances barely accounted for
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