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The First Day It was a bright sunny day the sky was a soft shade of blue and there was a slight breeze in the air I stepped out of my moms red shiny CRX as she said Good Luck to me I forced up a weak smile as I shoved the door and it made a woosh noise as it closed I took a deep breathe and started walking towards the man entrance I thought to myself Why does the school have all the buildings seperated I slowly walked forward as I started looking at all the other kids most were in groups and all talking laughing and smiling I felt very small like I was an alien who had just landed on planet Earth I thought to myself I should be at home with my friends talking and laughing But I wasnt I was in Rocklin California Id moved here at the begging of August And Id hated it ever since But I was willing to give Rocklin a shot even though ever kid Id met in town so far had said Rocklin is the worst school As I walked forward with the white scrunched up piece of paper that told me my classes I tried to look like I fit in As I looked around for my class I noticed I was on the wrong side of the building At least I know where the main building is I said to myself The main building looked bright and cheery like the sun I trudged over to the main building trying not to look at anyone the pavement looked really white When I got to the main building I walked up to a Miss Kerby sitting behind a desk and asked her if she could tell me where this building was Instead I felt like I had just been arrested for murder
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