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Teachers comments A very well told story-that the reader shares with you 1920 Crash The sky was as clear as a calm sea not a trace of disturbance in the distance It was a beautiful day to be outside Hey kids Grab your bikes and lets go for a ride shouted my father from his workshop in the backyard We raced to our bikes grinning ear to ear The anticipation was so powerful I felt like I could ride to the moon and back The three of us started out our father in front and us two kids right behind following like geese flying south for the winter This is going to be fun I thought to myself We followed our father down the next street from ours Cory took off like a rocket Come on lets race he yelled to me over his shoulder I stood up on my pedals and forced my little yellow bike to catch up with him We raced to the end of the street where we stopped to catch our breath and wait for our father Lets go this way my father instructed as he slowly passed us We turned left and headed down River Road As we approached Carrs Hill I could hear my fathers caution to be careful going down the hill I was so revved up from our race that I could not control myself Not heeding my fathers warning I shot down the steep hill I did not see the danger that lay up ahead My tiny yellow bike moving faster and faster I was so scared I couldnt slow down I heard my fathers voice in the distance behind but I could not hear what he was saying And there it was a pothole I couldnt avoid it It seemed to hover in front of me no matter which way I urged my bike to go I hit it Straight on The
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