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For the first two days on the Colorado River we had been floating by on the current but now we were finally up to the daylong stretch of rapids that we were awaiting Before we could start however our guide had a piece of advice for us If someone falls over grab them by the shoulders of their life vest lean back and youll both fall back inside she said Still though most of our group was just itching to get into the rapids for the first timeAfter a full day of riding the rapids we were up to the most dangerous stretch of water Our guide said that this rapid began with a path no more than six inches wider than our raft that we would have to fit into perfectly We had no choice though but to continue on in to the class 5 whitewater Although we were exhausted from our long day traveling through mostly class 3 and 4 rapids we continued to paddle on through at our guides command When we were halfway through the rapid though we were hit with a surprise As we were paddling hard through the steep drop and rock filled water we collided with an object that was concealed by the opaque red tinted water The raft stopped short and jarred us backwards leaving us at the mercy of the treacherous current I heard a scream from behind me I was sitting near the back in front of a panic prone girl who we barely convinced to join us on the river in the first place I remembered this and quickly looked back only to see that she was in the river and had a look of terror on her face Before the current dragged her away I had to spring into action Just as everyone else was still recovering from the impact I
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