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When I watch the rain falling from my window every thing looks different Nothing seems complete anymore Ever since Dad left a few weeks ago things havent been the same Now Mom is always drinking yelling and throwing things Home just isnt a place I want to be anymore I cant help but think that I am the reason why my Dad left That Im the reason my home is a broken one Maybe I asked for things too much Didnt listen enough maybe I was disobedient I blame myself Its my own fault Mom is acting this way Bring home different men every night Its hard to go to sleep at night because theres always noise coming from her room It isnt easy for me to see her constantly drunk and in a rage She hasnt been taking things easy Every since Dad left shes been a mess Shes barely even my Mother anymore Maybe if I had done things differently things would have been better Dad would have stuck around and Mom wouldnt be like this This is so frustrating Its hard for me too I dont have a Dad anymore Yeah I dont have a Dad anymore Hes gone Out of my life completely for good And Mom Well I can forget about bringing any friends home Its time I faced it My life is in shambles and it seems to be completely irreparable Theres nothing I can do to fix it anymore I have to stand by and watch my Mother make a mockery of herself Me I get to do this fatherless Suddenly the thought comes to mind that theres no way I can live my life like this I cant hide in embarrassment of my Mothers actions I cant go through my life being abused and beaten and I certainly cant deal without a father I spot the gleaming knife from the other
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