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I was sixteen years old and in my opinion old enough to do anything on my own Although I was still young I wanted to behave maturely But of course when adolescents act in ways they dont usually act things turn out worse I thought I was more responsible and trustworthy My parents drove me everywhere but only when my friends were unavailable I am sure it eventually became tedious driving me around but they seemed to not object It eventually became tedious for me driving with my parents but there is nothing like getting out of the house Sometimes I just need to get out of the house but rides are not always available Still sixteen I was working for a window company and making a good deal of money I only worked for a few hours a day but ten dollars an hour added up real quick It was painful walking or having a friend drive me to work after school every day I wanted some freedom some time to myself So it was time to buy my own motorcycle It was a 1980 Suzuki 250 in mint condition yet real old It ran great but because of its size ran slowand loud Parts were hard to find so I had to keep my self on the bike and off the ground But the shortage of parts and price of repairs didnt stop me from crashing or being irresponsible I finally had the freedom that I had been waiting for I felt I was older and capable of doing whatever I want on my own I was able to drive or ride myself anywhere I was really excited all I did while out of school or work was ride around town and get away from home I eventually got too involved in my new motorcycle that it eventually caused me to ditch my classes at school I received a letter in the mail
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