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I chose my mom because she has truly been one of the most influential persons on my life I owe almost everything to her for why I am the person that I am today She taught me manners how to treat people and most importantly taught us boys about God Those Sunday mornings I know it was hard for her to go to church without a husband but she did it for us boys The important things to her would be us boys and that she was a housewife for over 20 years She has just recently moved to Oklahoma and is very respectably providing for herself This point in time is very good for my mother and I because we are now building a relationship for the first time in years Slowly but surelySecondly I chose my younger brother Chris who is a year younger then me He is really one of the funniest guys I know Except if that you were to first meet him you probably wouldnt think he was as funny as I made him out to be His humor is very dry and most of the time his actions a humor is funny because I know what to expect I know how he used to be growing up which he was a very quiet boy Through the years I have seen him blossom into a very likable and outgoing person Because my brother and I are so close in age we were best friends growing up We did everything together Currently his interests are working out and playing baseball Even though we are many miles apart we are still very close Every time we see each other we still have fun together He is one of my best friendsMy brother Joshua is five years older then I am and we have many things in common We seem to be very similar in thinking and everything else we do We seem
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