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She started to show three months into our first semester sophomore year It wasnt the first time I had seen someone my age turn before my eyes from a college student into a woman The fine distinction between adult and student is one that is made often When a prospective employer sees student as your main occupation on an application they immediately make one assumption- your main goal your main focus is your own success When she started to show three months into our second semester of college and her hips started to widen her face fill out her body reflect that happy pregnant glow the student in her began to melt away I called Lori her roommate to come over at around 10pm that night We had made plans to play absurd question Guess Who and smoke bongs This had become a Wednesday night ritual for us We split up the evening eating smoking and taking out the Guess Who boards trying to stump each other by asking questions like would your character lend me his or her bike But for the first time on this particular Wednesday Lori asked me to come to her room instead I think Michelle wants to hang out with us too she explained I groaned Michelle Loris roommate whom I had been a fan of during my freshman year in college had made the mistake of sleeping with my boyfriend at my birthday party two months before The two of them went upstairs and quietly entertained each other in his shower They walked downstairs soaking wet She wasnt wearing the fancy blue shirt she had put on for the occasion It was a wine and cheese party Tears never fell onto my beautiful blue strapless dress I didnt know how to deal with what was happening I told myself she didnt know we were together That he had made a mistake and could be forgiven and that it
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