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I am weak I may look like someone who stands tall with inner strength but inside I am frail Like a little leaf thats easily blown I am vulnerable I live in fallacy I hide behind a mask of sunshine Yes I smile and laugh a lot I look like someone who doesnt have a care in the world It may seem that I bathe in happiness but are you sure that there isnt a shadow lurking behind all these After all it may be just a faade Any person who knows me would tell you Im emotional Very emotional Cries at the shallowest of things may get angry for no particularly clear reason Nobody understands why for there are a lot of things that they dont know I usually tell people about my family problems and the story-telling session always follows the same vicious cycle I suddenly tell them something about my family- theyll all look shocked- theyll ask me how was I coping with all that- I just shrug as if everything was just peachy-keen Finally theyll all conclude that I dont mind that dumb family business at all Of course thats what I always let them think I wouldnt want them to be burdened by some useless things like that after all Or so I think But then youll wonder If Im so in desperately need of solace why in heavens name wont I let them know what I really feel Thats easily answered Theyll never be able to understand what Ive gone through because theyve never been there You think everything will be alright once Ive let it all out dont you Well guess what I advice you should think twice Things like these may seem harder than it looks especially if youre surrounded by people whose life map doesnt include your particular route
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