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After a long hard day of work I like to unwind and relax by going up to my room lying on my bed turning the radio on and listing to the music While in my bed all nice and warm I start relaxing and letting go of my stressful day I can feel myself drifting away I fall asleep listen to the msic Subsequently I can see a tall antique building grayish in tone As the horse drawn buggy takes me there the driver gets down and opens the door for me When I walk up the stairs to the double French doors an usher opens them for me calls my name aloud Miss Elizabeth Michelle Smith Everyone stops to look at me how important and special I feel I am wearing a peach ball gown with elegant cream lace running over the top of it My hair pulled up with curls running down my cheeks My make-up is dark I can tell I did not apply it Everyone was dressed so elegantly in their gowns and the gentleman all in black tie On the stage at the back of the room there is a band playing lovely instrumental music Everyone was dancing and having a good time From out of nowhere a handsome gentleman approaches me and asked if he could have this dance I agree to dance with him as he takes me by the hand so gently and he leads me to the middle of the dance floor We start dancing and the people around us stop what their doing and start watching us dance I can not believe this gentleman and I are dancing so coordinated it is like we have known each other of years but I do not recognized him the crowd eyes are in amazement When the song ends everyone applauds As people start to approach us and ask Where did you learn how
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