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Being at a rock concert is an awesome experience There are so many people all having an excellent time The band thats about to play is getting setup with all the instruments and power chords and such Backstage theres people talking drinking partying and carrying on When the band plays loud it pumps up the people and they start a mosh pit Everyone is just going crazy and having a great party experience I walk up to the door and I give the doorman five bucks to get in he makes a mark on my hand I walk in and everyone is standing there talking and waiting for the bands to begin I walk around and look for people I know and I see my friends I walk over and talk to them Then I here things like OK Lets get this started and You guys ready for some hardcore rock Everyone screams in approval and agreement They begin to play and the mosh pit starts The people in the pit are pushing and shoving and throwing everyone around Thats hardcore I walk outside to cool off and chill I see people standing outside smoking cigarettes and drinking I look over and see cops driving by and looking disgusted at the punk rock scene Oh well they can deal with it I walk to my car and grab my skate and head back to the front entrance I get there and I see more people skating and going crazy I join them There are people walking around checking for underage smokers and drinkers That doesnt stop those kids They arent too strict about it anyway I hand this kid my skate and tell to him skate for awhile I walk back inside I get inside and the first band is done and the next one setting up and people are taking a break from all the moshing and yelling I walk to the bathroom and
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