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This past summer my mom was going on a business trip to San Diego and she asked me if I wanted to come along We had gone to Florida a few times in the past and I loved the coast and big cities so I said yes She also asked me if I wanted to take a friend along and I thought that would be awesome because I would get to have someone to hang out with down there instead of being alone So I took my friend Cole A he is a year older than me We both took work off and went down there for 5 days Cole has never been in an airplane before so the plane ride itself was exciting for him We flew from Minot to Minneapolis then to Los Angeles and then finally to San Diego He loved the plane ride I think that he took half a role of pictures before we even got to San Diego I like the airports because you are exposed to a lot of different culture In Minneapolis for example there are people coming and going from all over the world not just the Unites States They also have a large selection of shops that you can visit while you wait for your flight When we were there we only had a 30 min wait but our flight was cancelled so we had a lot of time to hang around the airport Because our flight was cancelled that messed up our preceding connections It was a real mess and my mom wasnt even on the same flight path as us and she was already there for four hours We had to take a smaller plane from Los Angeles to San Diego to complete the trip When we got to San Diego we went right to the hotel and both Cole and I were tired I was sick and I went to sleep
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