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For some reason I felt gloomy all day long while I was in school So all the lectures delivered by teachers seemed interminable Upon hearing the last minute bell signifying the end of the school I hurriedly packed my backpack and got out of the school I walked with my friends to the nearest bus station The first bus we saw was already packed with so many people that there seemed to be no available seats The very sight of it made me sick The second bus also was filled with people so we decided to catch a taxi After about twenty minutes we finally arrived at near my house When I was saying goodbye to my friend I heard the voice of my mother saying Hohyun your father is in hospital I dont even know what happened to him Dont worry Everything will be fine Just fine Seeing surprised faces of my friends I ran quickly to my house and called my sisters name out She was crying I did not even ask her why she was crying I gently asked my sister trying my best to hide my tears Do you know what happened to father She told me that father was in Chunnam Hospital Without further asking any more questions we caught a taxi and asked the driver to take us to the hospital The driver asked me why I was crying and told me that a man should never cry over anything I was just crying and crying From the front door I could recognize some of my fathers friends as they were talking to each other I could see my relatives who were near enough to come and sympathize my poor mother I could see my mother crying As soon as I approached her however she looked determined and calm I knew that she just acting like she was fine I knew that she was just saying fine not to
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