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I tried to walk out of the liquor store as fast as I could without raising any suspicion I was in the back of the store several aisles away from the double sliding doors the doors that led to relief Beads of sweat slowly appeared on my forehead as I began to think about my path out of the store After carefully mapping out my escape route I give a small sigh It was more of a shudder than a sigh I began to move my legs My knees felt weak from the thought of moving I began to pass the beer refrigerators in the back and make my way to the front My breathing became harder It was very cold Everything is going in slow motion Every step I take feels like an hour has gone by I pass a couple customers that seem to bore a whole in my head whenever they look at me They are all suspecting me of something They are out to get me As I round the corner I see a store clerk The second I see him our eyes met and I felt like gagging I immediately turn around and go the other way There has to be another way out of this store I quickly re-plan my escape route and start heading towards the checkout counters The store clerk there was busy ringing up a customer a perfect chance for my departure When I walk past the clerk she turns to me and says good night I could not move my lips at this moment for it was colder than back in the refrigerated aisle I managed a stiff nod and continued out of the store Im so close to the outside The speed of my walking increased slowly As I passed the double doors I let out a breath I didnt know I was holding I thought it was a sigh of relief but it
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