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Have you ever had an occasion where you could prove you were better than someone What about a time when you lost control and over-reacted to something Sure you have at least once in your life When spring first arrived I was very excited because the lacrosse season was starting I surely had missed it since I hadnt played fall ball Then came the tryouts at the second week of March I was still very excited to be playing lacrosse I made the C team but that was ok since it was only my second year At the first practice I was amazed at what I saw we had all the best players in our team including players that should have been on B or even A teams I was sure that this year unlike last year we would win the tournament and get accepted into the Big-Dog tournament So far this sounds like a happy beginning doesnt it Well this happiness didnt last very long I remember that day when everything suddenly twisted around It was our fourth game in the season and we were playing one of the best teams in the whole tournament This team just happened to be my friend Joes team It was amazing everyone was playing at their hardest to win It was the last quarter in the game the score was five to four us and I was in crease defense therefore it was my job to keep other players away from the hole a point in a lacrosse field that is in front of the goal During about the last fifth minute I saw the ball fly away from the defensemen of the other team to their midi That midi just happened to be Joe I knew Joe for a long time so I knew what he was going to do he was going to run the ball up the field Just as I predicted he was
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