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The day I left Vietnam KienCuong Nguyen I still remember that day it was July 4 1994 My family including my parents my three younger sisters and I were going to leave Vietnam to come to the United States We had permission from the United States government to come over to the United States because my father used to work for the United States Army during the Vietnam war I woke up about eight oclock in the morning After breakfast I dressed up and walked around to say good-bye to my neighborhood Some of my neighbors wished me a good life and a better education some told me keep in touch with them Then I went back to my house It was full of relatives and friends They came to visit us for the last time and some of them would go with us to the airport My girlfriend was inside she was waiting for me I met her one year ago and we fell in love after six months When she knew I would leave she cried a lot I took her to the balcony where we had our privacy We sat down and then she silently cried on my shoulders I knew she loved me very much and did not want to let me go She looked at me with tears and asked Will you come back I do not remember how many times she asked me this question And I always replied with the answer Yes I will I told her After I finish school in America I will come back Then we went out to have lunch at a restaurant near my house When we came back everybody was ready to leave because my Dad wanted to get there early in case we had to do some paperwork Most of people took a bus with my parents and my sisters some had to leave because they had to take care
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