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Running from the Five-O We like to party That was the song everyone was hollering to inside I walked up to the door and opened I was hit with smoke the smell of alcohol and loud people and music Donalds house looked alive with people There must have been 100 people packed into his small 1 car garage and 40 cars in his front lawn Everything was just like normal at his house except there was quite a few cars carelessly parked in the front lawn instead of the back like normal But it was Donalds 18th birthday and everyone was ready to celebrate I was a little bit nervous about the cops but after an hour I was dancing and having a good time I stepped outside to catch a breath of air that wasnt filled with smoke and there were probably 20 or so people standing around talking so I joined them I was laughing and cutting up as Andrew grabbed my arm and said Cops Run Get in the field now As I was running I was imagining what my dad was going to say to me when he saw Jackson County Jail on the caller id He would kill my mom and I both for telling him I was going to a movie and a friends house With all these thoughts running threw my head all I could process was Andrew saying run As I was making my way threw the fresh cut cornfield in three-inch heel go-go boots dodging corn stalks that were missed by the picking machine Ring ring ring Oh no I thought to myself What if this is my dad Where am I going to tell him I am in a cornfield Yah right I yelled at the four people next to me to stop running so I could answer my phone It was my boyfriend He had just left the party and heard over
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