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A Personal Reflection About my Teacher's Story of Heroism

This is a personal reflection about a teacher's story and how it inspired the student. The author learned about everyday heroes who respond in emergency situations.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is a great story with an important lesson, and you do a good job of inspiring your audience to find the courage to act in an emergency situation. The story would be much clearer if it were broken down into paragraphs. Make sure when you are quoting someone that you make it clear who the speaker is. There are some pronoun errors (using "my" when you are talking about someone else) and a few other grammatical errors that should be cleared up. Finally, consider expanding your conclusion where you discuss what you learned from the story."

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