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Mami its Buppies she screamed There she sat on our brown sofa withher knees up to her chin She is wearing her faded hot pink Bubble Guppiesshirt Her soft curly brown hair pulled into two puffball pig tails Thesmell of sour cream and cheddar potato chips radiating off her breathe Sheis crunching away in between singing I wanna be a cowgirl Her laugh ismenacing like she is plotting something grand As I watch her a feeling ofadoration over comes me She is my favorite person in the world because sheis my only daughter she is a perfect combination of both my husband andmyself and she worries about her brothers endlessly I like to think of her as my surprise baby I had my son almost 4 yearsbefore giving birth to her After four years I was sure I was not going tohave another child then 2 days after my birthday I get the news that I waspregnant again I wish and hoped for a little girl There are only boys inher generation of grandchildren so the outcome of a girl was a big dealMy family went wild with excitement when the received a copy of my ultrasound showing her hamburger as they call it Then twenty-two months afterher birth I gave birth to another little boy She is my only little girlShe is the only one I get to put in a dress the only ones nails who I canpaint and the only ones hair who I can braid I only get to do to girlythings with her which makes our bond a little closer than the bonds I havewith my sons When you have a child you wish for it to have all of your good attributesbut none of your flaws She is a perfect blend of both daddy and mommy Herfather dark skinned and tall her mother light skinned and average heightShe has an olive
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