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A Personal Reflection on Parenting and Attachment Styles

In this personal reflection essay, the student examines parenting styles and parent-child relationships in the context of her own life and her relationship with her father.
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Whitney's feedback:

"Overall, this is a strong personal reflection, and you did a good job of tying your personal experiences to the instructional material. In order to further strengthen your paper, I recommend elaborating more thoroughly on some points that you did not delve into. For instance, in your conclusion, you said that you have learned the parenting style you'd like to uphold and the attachment style you'd like to encourage in your own children -- what are they? Additionally, I'd give further consideration to the information that you're citing throughout the essay. For example, on page three, you added a citation to a sentence about your personal experience, but there are some more factual sentences without citations. I'd also consider adding another source for additional context and information. Finally, be sure to proofread for grammar/spelling/style errors. This essay was fairly strong in terms of formatting and conventions, but there are a few errors that could be corrected to make this even better!"

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