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Fists of Rage Two months ago on a Friday my friends and I decided to go camping in Wisconsin for the weekend This trip meant so much to me for the summer was coming to an end and my friends were going away for college We decided on taking one car leaving mine as a POW in front of my brothers fortress My brother is the root of all evil and with eighteen years of development his devilish ways are far more powerful then the minds of my elders For countless years his reign of terror haunted those he slithers across From robbing his girlfriends house to pawning my mothers engagement ring or breaking car windows because you can see through them Theres no reason theyd suspect ive done it once poured out of his mouth like scorching lava Holding his acts as if they gave him a sense of pride Its a half hour before our departure now the thought that my car must be left somewhere is picking at my brain The phone cant seem to find my grandma and other hideouts lurk even greater dangers My car will have to hold out under the protection of my supporters Were still in front of my house now and my friends are still trying to persuade me to leave my car here But I cant especially since he broke my moon-roof weeks ago and stole my Nintendo days before I know my parents have no control and wouldnt believe hes capable of his unspeakable nature Oh god no this is bad As I turned around to look at my house I saw him He was right there on the porch sitting in his throne he must have heard every word GRRRR Im frustrated now this debate shouldnt exist in the first place Just leave it Kamila said and so we left The trip there was torture Not only was this a 6 hour drive
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