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A Personal Statement about Computer Science and Game Design

This personal statement explores the author's passion for game design. The author uses anecdotes about playing video games and then transitions into their experience in game development and interest in computer science.
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Alex's feedback:

"This personal statement does well to show how you've developed your interest and skills in computer science and how you want to apply them to video game design. The content is generally good, but it could be improved by making specific reference to the school's programs, professors, clubs, and classes that you are interested in. This will show that you have done your research and understand what opportunities the school offers. As well, there are a few grammatical issue that should be addressed to help maintain a professional tone throughout."

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