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I strongly believe that the key to world reform is self-reform By attending the University of Colorado I hope to attain a strong education that will help me achieve significant reforms that in turn will let me help others Currently I am a freshman majoring in chemical engineering and pre-medicine When I graduate from CU I plan to further my studies in medical school or perhaps dental school More importantly I wish to set a good example for others to follow through my hard work and determination In receiving my acceptance letter during my senior year I immediately decided that the University of Colorado would be the school of my choice By making that decision I also made a commitment to make the University of Colorado a better place to learn and to live At the moment I am keeping my commitment by helping peers with their individual problems volunteering throughout the community and most importantly trying to learn the most that I possibly can I actively try to follow through with my promise to the University After graduating I expect to keep my commitment by doing several things that will improve the learning experience for future students First I plan to participate in the educational process by being a mentor to a needy student whose field of interest is similar to mine By being someone that the student can look up to I hope to provide guidance and encouragement as well as motivation In addition I will help out by donating time and personal services in order to better my entire community Also I will donate a portion of my wages through scholarships to a student whose family finds themselves financially unstable Ultimately by keeping all of my commitments I hope to reinforce my belief that world reform can only be attained through self-reform
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