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The last time that I cried was on this past New Years Eve I had planned on making this New Years Eve the best ever since for the past three years Ive unfortunately had a rotten night to bring in the New Year which I think jinxes my chances of having a good year Anyhow I was in Fairfax Virginia at the time visiting my dad and my friends I had previously been living in Virginia for two years for my sophomore and junior year So for my senior year I decided to come back to Richmond and be with my mom New Years Eve started off to a good start My friend Teresa and I went shopping for new outfits so wed look our best at this big party we planned going to later that night with some other friends After that we went to my house and got ready Once we were ready we left my house to meet up with our other friends We ended up taking two cars Teresa and I in one car Holly Lisa and Kari in another car Now for the past few days I had been kind of down and out Before I moved back to Indiana in August I was seeing a guy name Jimmy Felker who I thought at the time was so wonderful and sweet We got along so great We had so much in common There was definitely a connection between us His friends loved me and I loved his friends just as much After I moved I tried to stay in touch with him like we had planned but that didnt happen I wrote him two letters and phoned him a few times but never reached him Then his cousin and I talked one day and he had said that Jimmy had run away to New York I became very devastated and concerned after I learned this I worried almost
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