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My name is Cameron Mcleod and Iam going to share my story with you It deals with peer pressure and popularity In order for you to picture this close your eyes and let me walk you back a few years to a time when I was entering into Junior High school All of the cool kids smoked cigarettes and if you didnt then you werent IN I being young decided to try it and that was the right decision at that timeOne afternoon my best friend and I decided to go to the store across from our school There we were confronted by some of the members of the older and cool popular group They started to talk to us This made us feel good someone is interested in who we are The one of them said do you want a smoke At this point it didnt bother me Until my best friend said sure As he lit one up for the first time I watched in shock and than wonder hit me - will they ask me next Well they didnt but my friend-said Cam just try one everyones doing it My heart went into my throat because it was not something I wanted to do really but now was being pressured into doing The older kid of the popular group said come on chicken All of a sudden chills were running up my spine it felt like the world stopped turning and all I could hear was my heartbeat and my best friend saying COME ON In a frightened voice I said sure Then I took the cigerette that was being offered to me and lit it up I choked at first but overall I liked smoking Because after that day people thought I was cool Was I Probably not but fitting in seems to take over common sense when your young and in this situationNow as I look back on that
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