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A Persuasive Essay on Why Immigrants Are Not a Threat to Americans

The author of this essay presents the argument that the United States cannot deport all illegal immigrants who already reside in the country. The essay also explores the idea that immigrants make up the workforce because they will work for lower wages, while also arguing that corporations do not pay high enough. Additionally, the essay includes a strong works cited list and good in-text support.
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Amanda's feedback:

"I thought you presented a lot of really valuable arguments here and used some great supporting information for your claim. Unfortunately, this paper can be hard to understand at times due to errors in grammar, syntax, and phrasing as well as organization issues. One thing that is very well done here is MLA style -- great work! I would strongly suggest having this edited before you turn it in and refocusing your argument to ensure that your thesis specifically states what you're going to talk about in the paper and then then you discuss those exact things (it's too general right now). Also, look up crime rates for immigrants -- they are basically nonexistent, and it would add some strong support to that argument to have a source that indicates as much."

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